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Victory day is a great day for my entire country. This Day, for which many of our ancestors gave their lives in battle. We remember and are proud to be the heirs of such a great country.
Every year we give cards and flowers to veterans, But looking at the parade and salute that takes place annually on red square, you understand that we have nothing to fear. And it is so nice to tie the St. George ribbon and feel that you are involved in all this greatness.

At home, we often watch Patriotic films about the great Patriotic war, and I use the film to decorate the window and photograph it. 9 May is one of the most favorite celebrations of my life
Заранее СПАСИБО.